Write effective testimonial assessments in the PYP (2023)

Geraldine De Fazio, Snigdha Baduni and Pallavi Dhody Dwivedi

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As a teacher, writing testimonials is one of the most important and at the same time most challenging tasks for us. we want itcommunicatingto be meaningful, convey student learning clearly to all involved and be individual to each of our students. Each school and system has its own particularities in terms of the language, tone and style of feedback and tasks, especially for schools linked to local or national mandates. In this resource, we'll look at: "How can we write 'effective' testimonial reviews to meet the needs of everyone involved?" We browse by -

• The purpose of comments in a testimonial
• Dos and Don'ts when writing reviews
• structure of a comment
• Useful words and phrases/sentence starters for writing comments
• List of comments to start

What is the purpose of comments in a testimonial?

A good starting point for writing effective reviews is to think about the purpose.References. How often do we really think about why the report is commenting? Have you ever stopped to look at this topic from different angles? Take a moment to think about the purpose of the report comments:

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• Students
• Parents/Guardians
• Lehrer
• managers and administrators

If we stop to think about it this way, it becomes clear that comments serve no single purpose. In general, we are likely to see the purpose of providing the student/parent/guardian with personalized and meaningful feedback about learning, sharing successes and challenges and outlining possible supportive actions. We also welcome actionable suggestions on how students can achieve their learning goals.

From the teacher's point of view, feedback is a way of reflecting on teaching and learning. Reviewing past reports can be helpful in planning the next learning cycle from year to year. This helps teachers meet students where they are and plan their next steps.

School leaders and administrators often look at reports from a holistic perspective and see report card feedback as an expression of school-wide practices. You can use its information to make informed decisions about learning cultures.

So when you sit down to write your comments, it would make sense to first identify these purposes and frame your comments in response to them. Below, we've put together some guidelines that can help you get started.

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1. Dos and Don'ts when writing reviews
2. structure of a comment
3. Useful words and phrases/sentence starters
4. example comments

Dos and Don'ts when writing reviews

To start the feedback process, we've found it helpful to develop a broad understanding of what should and shouldn't be included in testimonial feedback. You can use these general dos and don'ts, which probably apply in most settings, to get your writing started.

structure of a comment

We know it can be daunting to write an original review for each of your students! To make the task easier to complete and ensure you cover everything you intended, we recommend giving each of your comments a context. You can divide the comment into the following four parts and comment on each of them:

• Anchor/General positive course (behavior, character, student profile)
• Student-specific strengths (may also include ATL skills)
• Students' needs and challenges (academic and/or behavioral)
• Next steps/support for parents

Useful words and phrases/sentence starters

Certain words and phrases, often drawn from the common language of learning, can help create insightful feedback. In PYP terms, they are derived from the learning outcomes of the Scope and Sequence documents.Approaches to learning skillsand subsets of skills and theIB-Lernerprofilattribute. We've taken each of these aspects into account and developed a writing packet filled with useful words, phrases, and comment starters, following the four-part structure suggested above.

While you can easily use these when writing your feedback, also consider drawing inspiration from your school's mission, vision, and shared culture.

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} }); jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_label_others").on("click", function(){ var checkbox3 = jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tool_4"); checkbox3.prop("checked", !checkbox3.prop("checked")); if($("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tool_4").is(":checked")){ tools.push(jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tool_4").val()); } else { tools.splice($.inArray(jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tool_4").val(),tools) ,1 ); } }); jQuery(".Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tools-options").on("click", function(){ tools = []; jQuery.each(jQuery("input[name='Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tools_option']:checked"), function(){ tools.push(jQuery(this).val()); }); checkTool(); }); // end update fields.forEach(field => { jQuery(`#form-Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-${field}-error`).css("visibility", "hidden"); }); fields.forEach(field => { jQuery(`#form-Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-${field}`).focusout(function() { verifyField(field); 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const results = fields.map(field => { return verifyField(field); }); // start new update if($("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_role_1").is(":checked") || $("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_role_3").is(":checked") || $("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_role_5").is(":checked")){ //console.log("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_demo_candidate"); if ($("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_demo_candidate").prop("checked") || $("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_demo_authorized").prop("checked")) { jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_yourschool_role_error").css("display", "none"); } else{ jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_yourschool_role_error").css("display", "block"); console.log("error2"); return false; } } var role_new = jQuery(".role-new #select-selected").text();console.log("role new:"+role_new);if(role_new == "Please select" || role_new == "Please selectPlease select" || role_new == "Please selectPlease selectPlease select"){jQuery("#curriculum-error").css("display", "block"); console.log("error3");return false;}else{jQuery("#curriculum-error").css("display", "none");} // end new update var source = ""; const allValid = results.filter(item => !item).length == 0; if(curriculums.length <= 0){ jQuery(".download-form-loading").css("display", "none"); jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_role_error").css("display", "block"); jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-alertBox").fadeIn(300); setTimeout(function() { jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-alertBox").fadeOut(300); }, 3000); return; } else { jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_role_error").css("display", "none"); } // start new update tools = jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_your_tools").val(); if(tools == ""){ jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tool_error").css("display", "block"); jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tool_error").css("visibility", "visible"); console.log("error4"); return false; } else { jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_tool_error").css("display", "none"); } // end new update if (!allValid) { jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-alertBox").fadeIn(300); setTimeout(function() { jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-alertBox").fadeOut(300); }, 1500); console.log("error8"); return false; } // start new update let whatsapp_no = ""; let should_receive_event_update = ""; // end new update var tag_name = jQuery("#form-tag-name").val(); let blog_url = jQuery("#form-blog-url").val(); let resource_url = "https://learn.toddleapp.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/05/01_Sentence-starters-and-useful-words-1.pdf"; let resource_name = "Writing Effective Report Card Comments - Structuring a comment"; let poster_image = "https://learn.toddleapp.com/wp-content/uploads/2022/10/ezgif.com-gif-maker-61.webp"; let poster_color = jQuery("#form-poster-color").val(); let should_receive_update = jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_topshould_receive_update").is( ":checked" ); fieldData["shouldReceiveUpdate"]=should_receive_update; fieldData["shouldReceiveWhatsAppUpdate"]=should_receive_event_update; // start update fieldData["curriculum"]= curriculums; fieldData["tools"]= tools; // start update fieldData["whatsapp_no"]= whatsapp_no; // start update fieldData["your_school"]= your_school; // start update fieldData["school"]= jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top_download_resource_form_school_select option:selected").text(); var utmData = localStorage.getItem("learnUtmUrl"); var hutk = document.cookie.replace(/(?:(?:^|.*;\s*)hubspotutk\s*\=\s*([^;]*).*$)|^.*$/, "$1"); var data = { ...(fieldData || {}), blogUrl:window.location.href, url: resource_url, utmData:utmData, title:resource_name, jobTitle:fieldData["role"], posterImage:poster_image, posterColor:poster_color, shouldReceiveUpdate:should_receive_update, shouldReceiveWhatsAppUpdate:should_receive_event_update, // start update your_school:your_school, // start update tools:tools, // start update whatsapp_no : whatsapp_no, // start update type:"RESOURCE_DOWNLOAD", nurture_email_template_id: "", categoryIds:[295,300], curriculum:curriculums, acTag:"", coordinator_image:"https://learn.toddleapp.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/12/unnamed-2.png", coordinator_url:"https://bit.ly/3MtK8BF", teacher_r1_image:"https://learn.toddleapp.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/12/Frame-4088.png", teacher_r1_url:"https://bit.ly/38dDSPu", teacher_r2_image:"https://learn.toddleapp.com/wp-content/uploads/2022/01/Frame-4082.png", teacher_r2_url:"https://bit.ly/3s8MJt5", hutk: !_.isEmpty(hutk) ? hutk : "", } hubspotTracking(data); jQuery(".download-form-loading").css("display", "flex"); $.ajax({ type: "POST", url: "https://apigw.toddleapp.com/auth/website/learnRegistration", data: JSON.stringify(data), contentType: "application/json; charset=utf-8", crossDomain: true, dataType: "json", success: function(data, status) { window.dataLayer = window.dataLayer || [];window.dataLayer.push({ "event": "learnformSubmission", "formType": "Learn Registration" }); (function(w,d,s,l,i){w[l]=w[l]||[];w[l].push({"gtm.start":new Date().getTime(),event:"gtm.js"});var f=d.getElementsByTagName(s)[0],j=d.createElement(s),dl=l!="dataLayer"?"&l="+l:"";j.async=true;j.src="https://www.googletagmanager.com/gtm.js?id="+i+dl;f.parentNode.insertBefore(j,f);})(window,document,"script","dataLayer","GTM-TRNWKC6"); localStorage.setItem("userDataNew", JSON.stringify(fieldData)); localStorage.setItem("userData", JSON.stringify(fieldData)); jQuery(".download-modal-container").fadeOut(100); jQuery(".download-modal-container").css("display", "none"); jQuery(".download-form-success-sublabel").html(`Your copy of the ${resource_name} has been sent to ${fieldData.email}damit Sie nachfragen, lesen und teilen können; jederzeit und überall.»); // jQuery(".download-form-success-modal").fadeIn(100); // jQuery(".download-form-success-modal").css("display", "flex"); jQuery(".video-button-wrapper").fadeOut(100); jQuery(".video-button-wrapper").css("display", "nenhum"); jQuery(".download-form-loading").css("display", "none"); setTimeout(function(){ if(source=="ubd") window.location.assign("https://learn.toddleapp.com/thank-you?source=ubd&tagname=${tag_name}", "_blank") ; else window.location.assign(`https://learn.toddleapp.com/thank-you/?tagname=${tag_name}`, "_blank"); }, 1000); jQuery("body").css("overflow-y", "auto"); jQuery(".bg-modal").fadeOut(200); }, Fehler: function(status) { jQuery(".download-form-loading").css("display", "none"); jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-alertBox").text("Etwas ist schief gelaufen"); jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-alertBox").fadeIn(300); setTimeout(function() { jQuery("#Writing_Effective_Report_Card_Comments_top-alertBox").fadeOut(300); }, 3000); } }); retornar verdadeiro; }); var allschools = ["teste", "teste 2"]; if ((jQuery.inArray(fieldData["school"], allschools) == -1)){ var data1 = { country: fieldData["country"], school_name: fieldData["school"] }; var json1 = JSON.stringify(data1); $.ajax({ Tipo: „POST“, URL: „https://apigw.toddleapp.com/auth/website/addNewSchool“, Ημερομηνία: json1, contentType: „application/json; charset=utf-8“, dataType : "json", Erfolg: function(msg) { console.log(json1); console.log("New School aufgerufen"); }, Fehler: function(status) { console.log("New School mit Fehler aufgerufen" ); } }); } });

example comments

We have created a feedback bank with sample feedback on different 4th grade focus topics, understandings and skills and suggest next steps. Each comment is intended to serve as an indicative starting point. You can adjust the feedback and add general positive traits and challenges to fit the student's level using the Word and Sentence Writing Pack shared above. For schools using a reporting system that supports feedback databases, collecting these reports facilitates reporting while maintaining the individualized nature of each comment. The process of developing a feedback database with your school staff is worth the time and effort, and this sample will get you off to a good start!